Mike, the last two responses kind of just summed up what you read. I know you have to take a different approach, because it's a humorous book, but I need you to go deeper. Any Seinfeldesque observations of your own?
Shantel - 5/5 Responses
Good responses Shantel. Your last one gives good insight into that character's pattern of behavior. Just make sure to proofread. Capitalization and punctuation would be a good place to start.
Ayanna - 5/5 Responses
Great job Ayanna. You've got a good handle on the theme, and the combination of your responses really shed insight into Annette's character and to your needs as a reader. Great job. Keep up the good work. Cut out the sunflower seeds...lol.
Albona - 4/5 Responses
I like that last response (although, again...Nicholas Sparks? How chicky can a writer get?) Good look into theme.
Mike M - 4/5 Responses
Mike, the last two responses are pretty dry and plot driven. I need you to relate them to something or explore their significance. Or use a response question.
Luis - 3/5 Responses
Luis, I read the drafts of your responses and I must tell you that I am very impressed. I like the voice and I like the development and I like your confidence in your own opinions. Nice job.
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